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Friday, February 1, 2008

Candle n Poverty...........


The beauty you have got
The heart you have got

Has melted everyone...



The tear you shed

Shows your joy.



The decline in your height

Shows your peak of victory.



The brightness you give

The loveliness that you spread

Has never abandoned you.



You stand ever with the God,

You stand ever with the poor

To give them the light

To give them the hope

That one day...

They too will be the illuminators! !
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14 comments:

  1. Nivedhida DeviFebruary 4, 2008 at 3:07 PM

    Nice comparison...... :)
    but here the illuminators become the rich one by giving their light to make others shine....... :)

    SUPERBBBBBBBBB

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  2. UnknownFebruary 4, 2008 at 3:58 PM

    so gud priyanka..
    nalla karuthu solli iruka..

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2008 at 2:35 PM

    but in reality rich get richer.. and poor get poorer..
    may ur candle illuminate their minds...
    nice....
    expecting a lot from u..

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    thanx for ur comments... xpecting them ever.....

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  5. UnknownFebruary 8, 2008 at 10:05 AM

    really cool poem.....hope the poor get real light one day....continue ur gr8 work.....

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  6. naniFebruary 9, 2008 at 5:13 PM

    That's really NICE poem.....i had seen such a peom after a long long time.......

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  7. Priyanka AgrawallaFebruary 15, 2008 at 12:30 PM

    thnx praveen n thrinath... hope i will meet ur expectations...

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2008 at 10:57 AM

    very nice....

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  9. UnknownMarch 18, 2008 at 9:29 AM

    what a talent enlighting poem priyanka nice let we may enlight the candles

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  10. catonthewallMarch 22, 2008 at 10:38 PM

    u can write about lamps too they dont melt but 1ly illuminate

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  11. Karthik RaviDecember 23, 2008 at 5:04 AM

    Nice write up..

    I got one like this on my blog too..

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  12. balajihandsJune 7, 2009 at 2:07 PM

    The decline in your height
    Shows your peak of victory - we miss this :(

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  13. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 7, 2009 at 7:16 PM

    @ balaji

    but still there are many who have to depend on the light. And the fast growing economy is neglecting them!

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  14. UnknownJune 14, 2009 at 7:53 PM

    very nice poem da...:-)

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Thnx for your valuable feedbacks :)

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