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Friday, February 1, 2008

Candle n Poverty...........


The beauty you have got
The heart you have got

Has melted everyone...



The tear you shed

Shows your joy.



The decline in your height

Shows your peak of victory.



The brightness you give

The loveliness that you spread

Has never abandoned you.



You stand ever with the God,

You stand ever with the poor

To give them the light

To give them the hope

That one day...

They too will be the illuminators! !

14 comments:

  1. Nice comparison...... :)
    but here the illuminators become the rich one by giving their light to make others shine....... :)

    SUPERBBBBBBBBB

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  2. so gud priyanka..
    nalla karuthu solli iruka..

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  3. but in reality rich get richer.. and poor get poorer..
    may ur candle illuminate their minds...
    nice....
    expecting a lot from u..

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  4. thanx for ur comments... xpecting them ever.....

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  5. really cool poem.....hope the poor get real light one day....continue ur gr8 work.....

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  6. That's really NICE poem.....i had seen such a peom after a long long time.......

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  7. thnx praveen n thrinath... hope i will meet ur expectations...

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  8. what a talent enlighting poem priyanka nice let we may enlight the candles

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  9. u can write about lamps too they dont melt but 1ly illuminate

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  10. Nice write up..

    I got one like this on my blog too..

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  11. The decline in your height
    Shows your peak of victory - we miss this :(

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  12. @ balaji

    but still there are many who have to depend on the light. And the fast growing economy is neglecting them!

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Thnx for your valuable feedbacks :)