His hands and mine, were equally tight,Forever, let him be on my side.
He is my faith, he is my love,
He is my shield, he is my soul.
To him, I talked and talked,
But what did I ??
I see me in me, I hate,
I see him in me, best, I rate.
Like the butterflies, over a flower hovering,
He was in the centre and me circling.
I jump with joy,
Of what I cant express.
I jump with a feeling,
A feeling of completness.
I jump with victory,
For I defeated loneliness.
I jump with insanity,
For there is a person to take care.
I jump with all my strength,
For I wont care for myself any more length.
I jump with a feeling,
ReplyDeleteA feeling of completness.
Beautiful! I love the verse with these line sthe best-the pic is really nice too!
PS: based on real experience?(lolzz)
who is dat 'he'?
ReplyDeletebetween i hope its an real life experiance[lol]
am i right?
'I see me in me, I hate,
I see him in me, best, I rate'
cute lines...
@ mithe
ReplyDeletehahha... Thnk u Kiran.. waiting for the experience to be real!! It was just an imagination... :)
@ manithuligal
Thank u nithya akka.. :) It was an imagination, a dream.... waiting for the reality!!!
its fantastic.. u r expressed with fantastic lines.. :)
ReplyDeleteThnx Vel.. :)
ReplyDeletevery nice ma...i wish u all ur imagination comes true
ReplyDeletethnk u Princy... :)
ReplyDeleteHey priyanka,
ReplyDeleteReally nice one. I enjoyed the poem and these lines in particular.
"He is my faith, he is my love,
He is my shield, he is my soul."
May you write more.
Thank you Subbu...
ReplyDeleteYa vl sure, when a guide like u is always ther..:)
Hey so crazy lines..hmhm of course this s how a gal felt abt love? too gud in verse..Very nice too..
ReplyDelete"His hands and mine, were equally tight,
Forever, let him be on my side". Most Expected lines for a gal always..priya now am havin a doubt..u in love? hahaha nice of u
thnx vino...
ReplyDeletehhaha...not yet..
I see me in me, I hate,
ReplyDeleteI see him in me, best, I rate.
****************lovely lines ka.....
thnk u Sandy...
ReplyDeleteHey Prinyanka simply superb la..... if this is composed ......... wow !!!!!
ReplyDeletei liked this soooooooo much..... this kind of lines really superb from u
la....
Now i going to give u a title "Engilsh Thamarai" (Thamarai is a poetist in
tamil, who wrote all songs in Varanam Aayiram)
"I see me in me, i hate
I see him in me, best I Rate" kalakita la........ :) :) :) :)
English Thamarai.. wow!! thnx Nive!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome expression...
ReplyDeleteHey priyanka... It should be commented as excellent one!! Superb yaar!!! keep rocking....
ReplyDeletelove d wonder feeling makes things happen in dis world...even a blind can see...even a lay man turn to b genius of d world four letter word Love...
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