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Sunday, November 16, 2008

Oh my child!!!

Fragile there, the newborn lie,
Onlookers come and give a dive,
To have a lovely sight.

Mom keeps to herself,
Letting not anybody touch, but herself.

Fears she for her child,
May not get infections, any mild.

Touches she, the skin and fingers,
Smile is all in her face that lingers.

With eyes closed, the baby sleeps,
Mom with every second, gives attention deep.

She smiles at her own creation,
For she knows the pain of separation.

She kisses him, lauds him;
For, this is the last moment,
and then she can never see him....

14 comments:

  1. nice creation.. i envy your poetic skills. anyways keep them coming :)

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  2. nice lines n there s no words to express the love between mom n child n u have compared well here...n of course priya tryin to become a poet too..hahah go ahead...

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  3. Beautiful! loved the 'sense of protection' of a mother for her child in your poem....nice blog! Have blogrolled you-hope you don't mind

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  4. @ry

    haha..thnx.. let this make me a better poet...

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  5. Bravo bravo priyanka...simply gr88...
    a help..can come up with any poem on sisters??

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  6. thnx kamal.. :) :)

    already wrote yaar.. but no idea where it is.. when i vl come up wid tht or a new one.. vl inform u...

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  7. yaeh nice da kalakurapooo........

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  8. hi, didi, beautiful poem.i realy liked yhi poem. this reminded me of the last breathes of my idol-my father.

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  9. hi, didi, beautiful poem.i realy liked yhi poem. this reminded me of the last breathes of my idol-my father.

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  10. No words can fill the vacancy Akash...but it can be made unseen or get used to.. we are always there.. not an inch far not a second away...
    take care bcoz we care..

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