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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

The Accident: First attempt in 55 fiction!

This is my first attempt with the 55 word fiction...Hope u vl like it...
n dont forget to give ur valuable feedbacks!


He didnt notice the car coming towards him. His job was at stake. His father wanted to open a shop to support. "But pa, i dont have money".
His child needed education.
He was worried and then the car dashed him. His time came and he died peacefully.

His insurance money will open the shop.
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21 comments:

  1. annapoornaJune 9, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    wow..commendable job priyanka...cudn tel tat dis s ur debut n 55 fiction :)...d luv bond, 1 has 4 his father n son can't b explained more dan dis!!!:) keep on rocking buddy!!

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  2. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 9, 2009 at 11:27 PM

    @ poorna

    Thank u yaar. it feels great reading ur comment! I feel satisfied. i may pester u more with my future postings!! bear it! :)

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  3. UnknownJune 9, 2009 at 11:56 PM

    really nice post yr... got the same emotions as watching a climax in a movie :P

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  4. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 10, 2009 at 12:02 AM

    @prasanna

    hey..thnk u.. so good it sounded, haa??

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  5. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 9:49 AM

    Brevity is the soul of wit!!
    Well done priyanka :)

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  6. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 10, 2009 at 2:18 PM

    Thank u Rajesh :)

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  7. UnknownJune 10, 2009 at 2:43 PM

    yayaya indeed :)

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  8. Nutty MartianJune 10, 2009 at 3:58 PM

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  9. Nutty MartianJune 10, 2009 at 3:59 PM

    Bravo Good job...but thats a cruel way to die peacefully :P

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  10. janakiJune 10, 2009 at 7:06 PM

    wow..good job yaar..:)but i like ur lengthy stories...:)

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  11. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 10, 2009 at 7:36 PM

    @ Nutty

    Thnk u Nutty :) hehe... for him his peace rested in his family's happiness!! epdi??

    hey and thnx for following :)

    @Janaki

    Thnx yaar :) tht vl also come :)

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  12. experiencing...June 11, 2009 at 6:13 PM

    hey very nice try dear :P

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  13. UnknownJune 12, 2009 at 7:24 AM

    o very nice yaar..nw u become a gud novelist also..k all the best 4 future 1

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  14. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 12, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    @ princy
    thnx yaar :) :) wow..thts the greatest compliment i have ever received, thnx :)

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  15. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 12, 2009 at 11:49 AM

    @ Experiencing

    Thnk u sis :) :) nice to see ur comment :)

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  16. gJune 12, 2009 at 8:22 PM

    its a mix of fact n fiction..gud work la :)

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  17. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 13, 2009 at 12:46 AM

    @Padma
    thnx Padma... glad tht the work is liked :)Am hoping to do another soon!

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  18. roshwritesJune 14, 2009 at 2:57 PM

    This is a great attempt at 55 fiction! I liked the storyline!

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  19. Priyanka AgrawallaJune 14, 2009 at 3:07 PM

    Thank u rosh for coming here n commenting.. :)

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  20. AnonymousJuly 12, 2009 at 11:11 PM

    Awesome storyline describing the average joe's life !!
    *applause applause* =)

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  21. Priyanka AgrawallaJuly 13, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    Thnk u Gracy :)

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Thnx for your valuable feedbacks :)

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